My Holiday in Perth
In the holidays on Tuesday Mum, Tahli, Aunty, Toa and me went to the reptile park but when we got there it was closed and I said no! The adults thought I was mad. The adults just had to get coffee and I couldn't wait to get back to the reptile park. Finally we got there and it was open! I said hurry up, I raced threw the door and I wanted to see everything but first we went on a tour, I got to see a snake eating I felt scared. We went to go to see a snake that we could hold so I asked if I could hold it and it was almost invisible in my t - shirt. We went to touch a dragon, it felt prickly. His name was Zap.
In the holidays on Tuesday Mum, Tahli, Aunty, Toa and me went to the reptile park but when we got there it was closed and I said no! The adults thought I was mad. The adults just had to get coffee and I couldn't wait to get back to the reptile park. Finally we got there and it was open! I said hurry up, I raced threw the door and I wanted to see everything but first we went on a tour, I got to see a snake eating I felt scared. We went to go to see a snake that we could hold so I asked if I could hold it and it was almost invisible in my t - shirt. We went to touch a dragon, it felt prickly. His name was Zap.
I would be so freaked-out holding the snake and the dinosoar.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you added capital letters and full stops in your writing. Your photos made your writing more interesting to read.Did the snake crawl over your shoulder and down your back?
ReplyDeletewow Awhitia I Love how you added detail in to your writing .and I love the way that you added pitchers it really made your writing more interesting. did you get scared when the man put the snake on you
ReplyDeleteSup Awhi I really liked the way you did very good describing how the lizard felt.
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