The Parapara Detectives

School Journal Level 3, October 2013 

WALT explore a problem and the arguments for and against different solutions. WALT work out the meaning of unknown words.

FIRST DRAFT Duffy Theatre - Magic Bricks

Duffy was so excited to see his favourite cousin but when Sam was addicted to gaming. then Auntie grace came in the room and said hello Duffy I'll take your bag into your room Duffy what have you got in here bricks no books auntie said well I'll leave you two to it then Duffy said hey San do you want to play tag or we could ride our bikes ho I now we could make a hut you used to loved making huts then Sam said no the dismantler  Duffy said calm down its just a game Sam said its not just a game its a hole world she was a raging rhino.


 Duffy then put on Nana's glasses and started doing the dumpling dance and started to slowly disappear into the game and he had to choose his skin and he chose rectangular blocks that were spouts to look like muscles then the dismantler came with her road cones and said construction bricks must take bricks apart then he ran around and around the stage then Sam said the dismantler only beaks bricks. Duffy said OK I need to choose a new skin and he chose what looked like a fluffy chicken. He got some little helpers and he got them to hold big blocks and they had to find out a word well Duffy was thinking the puzzler came and puzzled it up for him and he had to 

My New Dog Lulu

The day before yesterday Mum Tahli and I went to a lady's place to see her dog named Lulu she was one-and-half. When we got there I ran straight to her and she jumped on me but I didn’t care I just gave her a big huge. We were inside and mum asked are we going to take a dog home and I yelled YES and we got her. When we were in the van she cries halfway home but before we went home we went to town to get her a lead a food and water bowl. When we got home we taught her for a walk and she loved it especially when it was dinner time she loves treats she would do anything for one delicious little treat. Lulu is a black and white and has the cutest face.